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Dim 22 Mar - 19:11
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Lun 23 Mar - 16:16
Henry Ford is the hero because he’s inventor of the fordism, famous model of organization and development of companies. Thanks to it, he designs a low-cost car.


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Mar 24 Mar - 13:50
Thank you Maiwenn for posting the first message!
Mind the pronouns (Ford was a man, not an object) and mind the tense (Ford is dead so you have to use past tense).
Can you correct your mistakes?
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